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 Raelis Shadestorm, "The Fallen Salvation"

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PostSubject: Raelis Shadestorm, "The Fallen Salvation"   Sun Aug 10, 2008 7:48 pm

Raelis was smart, strong, quick and very nice. He was sent off to train as a knight when he was just a child and progressed quickly. But for some reason he did not know, people avoided him. He finished training as a knight younger than most would expect. When he was 14, he was told he had to save Azeroth from impending doom from a demonic entity. He was trained in all combat styles until he was 17. He was sent to a templar to learn the ways of Holy to defend himself from the demon. He spent 5 years there. Then, the day came for him to depart for the demon had entered Azeroth and began to kill any who would stand before it. He arrived at Kargath with the knights helping him. As the fight progressed, the knights were impaled or beheaded. All that remained was an injured Raelis. He avoided the demon as long as he could. Then, with his last bit of strength, he jumped and impaled the demon in the heart with his sword. The demon died with a burst of green light almost killing Raelis. Badly injured, he crawled to an alliance town. They saw him not as an injured savior of the mortal plain but as a blood elf horde scum. He was captured but treated of wounds then sent to Durnholde Keep to be tested on. They gave him potion after potion so he could be trained as an alliance "supersoldier'. Year after year passed as new potions where tested on Raelis. It discolored his hair, made him skinnier and made the bone in his fingers longer. After his system could take no more, with his newfound power from the potions, he tore out the throat of the guard. As the guard suffered but could not yell, Raelis took the guards sword and watched him bleed to death. He killed any that stood before him as he made his escape. Guard after guard was torn to shreds by Raelis. After escaping, he came to the Templar's tower, and read the history book kept in the back of the library. He flipped through the pages and saw nothing about him killing the demon. Frustrated, he ripped the book and a small sheet fell saying" The so called "Savior" killed his fellow knights and ran from the demon. He cowered at a human town and the patrols there killed the demon." Raelis was filled with rage. He had saved every being on Azeroth and sacrificed himself to do it and he was ridiculed. Raelis went berserk from it. He killed everyone out of anger. Even the templar was stabbed and Raelis cackled as the templar bled to death. He went to horde and alliance towns alike and rended the heads from people's shoulders. He found the historian who wrote that book. He dulled his blade and laughed with satisfaction and each and every small blade sawed the historian in half. He looked at his skin and saw it was turning a whitish color. Raelis started to choke, then everything went black.... He awoke years later to find himself in a very dark place. He did not know he was in a coffin until he tried to move. He was tied down so he could not rise. His fingers were bony and sharp. He used this to his advantage and sliced the rope off. He carved a hole in the coffin and rose inside a mauseleum He broke down the door and took a broken dagger on the floor. He left found the torn pages from the history book. He was buried near the Templar's tower. He went to a deserted outpost and found a poster saying"Raelis Shadestorm: Wanted for genocide. If seen, do not approach, or attempt to make verbal contact. Leave the area as quicly as possible." He searched the camp and found a sword and some armor. He cut the tent and made a cloak to cover himself. He left to a tavern and asked around where to find Kargath. He was led to Kargath by an orc but Raelis saw the demon body gone and Kargath repopulated. He slew the orc and took any possesions from him. He did find where the demons relocated bones were after going to outland. He took his sword that was wedged in the bones and left to Shadowmoon Valley. He killed demon after demon using anything found to fashion himself unholy armor. He finished leaving half of Shadowmoon Valley liberated of demons. He returned to Azeroth to find Ikashi and kill him hearing that he was powerful. He resumed his mass murder of Azeroth destroying the realm that had cast away and forgotten him.

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Ancient evil, alive again,Seeks to destroy, obliterate,
Mortal heroes, allies of old,Betrayed by stone, betrayed by cowardice,
Betrayed by death,Fight to renew peace, with unlikely alliance,
Upon the sands of olden strife…Upon the Lands of Death…
Upon the swirling, furious oceans…Upon the lands of Night, of Dream…
Death may await, death may not, Come brothers,
No fear, For today, there is battle,
Tomorrow, there is victory,For as long as you make the right choices…
We shall prevail.


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PostSubject: Re: Raelis Shadestorm, "The Fallen Salvation"   Sun Aug 10, 2008 9:08 pm

Good story, he sounds like someone Darsh could easily manipulate. I love you

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PostSubject: Re: Raelis Shadestorm, "The Fallen Salvation"   Mon Aug 11, 2008 12:12 pm

Thanks but the actual character isnt made yet because i have no internet on mah laptop yet Sad

I found a cool picture for him though Smile
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/5133/genericuddkvp8.png

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Mortal heroes, allies of old,Betrayed by stone, betrayed by cowardice,
Betrayed by death,Fight to renew peace, with unlikely alliance,
Upon the sands of olden strife…Upon the Lands of Death…
Upon the swirling, furious oceans…Upon the lands of Night, of Dream…
Death may await, death may not, Come brothers,
No fear, For today, there is battle,
Tomorrow, there is victory,For as long as you make the right choices…
We shall prevail.
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