Vahalasi The Darkened One

hello i am Vahalasi, how i got the
name: The Darkened One. is only
because i am an immortal, not
a god, not a lord. here, is my story.

40663 -BC
I was there, alone in a Darkened room
scared as i was. people deserted me here.
i felt as if i was a hated disliked pile of decay.
What i have done you ask? all that i have done.
I have Stolen the dark shard of Tihuome. which
is an powerful artifact that is used to summon
great demon lord with power. not knowing what
it contained. i stole it. as when i stole it, i was only
243. it was in my pocket while i ran towards a great
person named Illidan. he was telling me of his battle
stories, and how he came to be a great hero
that everyone looked up too. i indeed was greatful of
that presence, so i showed him my stone. he told me
to take it and use it for myself. so of course i did.
Then, that was it, i was stuck in an endless void
a darkened room, no civilization was near.
until, it was over. 15334 years have passed.
i am now 17577 years to this day. there, in the
darkened room of hate, i learn my skills, immortality,
telekinesis and other fine ability's. i also met a few people
such as Tyrande. She helped guide me. but, when i was
very safe aroung her, it felt as if i could tell her my darkened
secret. It ended up horrible. she banished me. then when, she
told me of this banish. i declared i shall not, as i was a great model
in history. but, she said "I will no banish you.. for a price,
i will NOT include you, in any of the farther history."
if you found information about my helping to found
darnassus, It was most likely burnt out. so then
i have found a way, a way where people respect my power
respect my knowledge, and respect my darkness.
Mercenaries of the Sun.
but, i am immortal from this darkness.

-that, is my story-

A good story, if interested i can recommend you read the well of eternity trilogy to increase the length of your story through the War of the ancients, i feel that would make it a little bit more complete to me. But overall it is very good