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Cyndril
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PostSubject: Cyndril's story   Cyndril's story I_icon_minitimeWed Jul 23, 2008 8:34 am

yeah i can't write stories Very Happy so please don't pick up on me ^^

"Dude, don't ya think we're going too far?"
"Shut up..."
"But...Easil...I'm serious..."
"Aïlen, Easil told you to shut up! Are you dumb or something?"
Aïlen sighed. He looked at the tied girl lying on the ground.
"So..."-said Easil-"What should we do with you, mutant?"
The Elfish girl didn't moved an inch.
"I've asked you something, mutant!"
He took his wand and shooted her with energy. The girl cried and spewed with blood. Easil looked satisfied at her.
"Are you gonna answer me, mutant?"
Girl rised her head and looked weak at Easil. Her whole face was in tears.
"M-my name isss...Cyndril..."
"I KNOW YOU HAVE A NAME! EVERYONE DOES! DO YOU THINK WE'RE STUPID?!"-yelled Easil.
Cyndril looked at the ground and said:"I'm not the right person to tell you how much retarded you a..."
Easil hit her.
"Retared?...HAH, at least not as retared as your mother...How many Undeads did she banged?"
"My father...Wasn't a Forsaken..."
"He was a damn rotting corpse and nothing more..."
Cyndril laughed weakly.
"At least I know who's my father..."-She looked at Easil-"You can't say that, huh?"
Easil yelled angry and started to kick her. The others laughed and starred at both Blood Elven.
"I'm gonna teach you to respect me, slut..."
He grabbed a knife and ripped her clothes. Everyone laughed.
"Hey, Easil...What the heck are you gonna do? Rape her or what?"
"Haha, rape a mutant?! You're fucking kidding me, right? No, I'm gonna do something else..."
"What? C'mon tell us!"
Easil smiled.
"Not for nothing I'm called a 'Hellfire Warlock'..."
Easil laughed, but he was the only one. The other starred shocked at him.
"You...You don't...You don't want to burn her do you?"-asked Aïlen
Easil laughed even harder.
"Ofcourse not silly...I'm just gonna make some spots on her body...That's all..."
Easil gathered some energy and summoned a little fire from the deepest hells. His friends starred shocked at him. Easil sat next to Cyndril.
"Any last wish?"
Cyndril didn't asnwered.
"I take that as a no..."
He touched her stomach. Cyndril yelled as she felt her stomach burning. Tears appeared again in her eyes. After an eternity, or at least she tough so, Easil stopped.
"Hehe, and how do we feel, mutant?"
Cyndril, too weak to answer, breathed difficult.
"Okay, now time for part two..."
And then, suddenly, he got hit by a strange purple energy wave. He hit the wall and fell, but got up quickly. His shirt was covered in blood.
Angry, he looked up and fear appeared in his eyes. A young Elf was standing next to beaten and humiliated Cyndril. Shadows were surrounding his whole body and made him look purple. In his eyes was a pure bloodlust.
“Now”-said the Elf-“run as fast as you can and make sure I don’t see you again”
“Or else what?”-asked Easil, but not as proud as few moments ago-“are you gonna kill us? Huh?”
“…No, I’m gonna cut off your left leg and 7 fingers and sacrifice it to the Shadows”
Easil’s opened his mouth, but he didn’t dared to insult the Elf.
“Fine, we’re going…But make sure we won’t meet next time…Or…OR I’LL KILL YOU”
The group of boy ran away. The Shadows around Elf disappeared. And with them also the bloodlust. He looked at Cyndril with compassion. When he tried to touch her, she trembled and tried to get up, but she was too weak. Elf sighed and untied her. Then he touched lightly her forehead. Cydril felt her energy going away. Last thing she remembered, before she fainted, was that Elf lifted her up.
“Where am I?-Though Cyndril.
She opened her eyes and noticed she was in a rich looking room. Cyndril was lying on a bed made of some kind of expensive materials. The sheets were made of satin. Then she noticed she was wearing cloths. While looking around she heard a sound of feather. With difficulties she got up and loined against the wall.
“You’re awake. Good”
Cyndril looked quickly around and saw a Blood Elf sitting few feet from her and writing something. He stood up and sat next to Cyndril, which was looking scared at him. Elf touched her forehead.
“Good, your body temperature has decreased…”-He looked outside-”Now it’s 3 p.m. so you’ll have to take a medicine in 45 minutes…Now lay down and try not to move too much.”
Cyndril still starred scared at him. The Elf noticed it at smiled warmly.
“Don’t worry, I won’t hurt you”
“Who…are you?”
“They call me Ker’sael.”
Cyndril questioned him.
“So isn’t that your real name?”
“It is.”
“So why did you said ‘they call l me Ker’sael’?”
“…Because they do…So, tell me, how are you feeling?”
“Where am I? And why did you saved me? What did you do to Easil and the others? And to me?...”
“Which question do you want me to answer first?”
Cyndril blushed. Ker’sael smiled.
“I’m sorry…”
“Don’t be sorry. You’re in my inn at Fairbreeze Village. Why did I saved you? Because you were in need. I shooed away Easil and others. What did I do to you?-said Ker’sael and coughed- Well, first I put you in comma so I could take you here. Then I sealed the remaining Hellfire away from your body and healed you, what took…Ummm…I suppose like 2 hours since Hellfire wounds are extremely difficult to heal…”
Cyndril quickly touched her stomach and noticed that her wounds were gone.
“…I gave you some new cloths and put you in a healing comma, so you’d heal faster. I also magically applied my potions to you and…”
“What do you want me in return?”
Ker’sael looked confused at Cyndril.
“In return?...”
“Yes, you must have done this because you wanted something.”
Ker’sael sighed deeply.
“You don’t believe in person’s good will, do you?”
“No, I’ve never met those…So, what do you expect from me?”
Ker’sael looked a little shy at Cyndril, but didn’t seem to dare to say what he though.
Yeah so this is the 1st part of my rp story. As you saw I can’t write good stories 
If you liked it anyway, thanks


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PostSubject: Re: Cyndril's story   Cyndril's story I_icon_minitimeWed Jul 23, 2008 9:41 am

Thats a great story very origal i loved it
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PostSubject: Re: Cyndril's story   Cyndril's story I_icon_minitimeWed Jul 23, 2008 10:00 am

thanks :3
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PostSubject: Re: Cyndril's story   Cyndril's story I_icon_minitimeWed Jul 23, 2008 11:20 am

Good story. I'm tempted to make a warlock named Easil. O_o
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PostSubject: Re: Cyndril's story   Cyndril's story I_icon_minitimeWed Jul 23, 2008 12:11 pm

Reminds me of Eilasil back on Retail.. Didn't he arrest your bro once? XD
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PostSubject: Re: Cyndril's story   Cyndril's story I_icon_minitimeWed Jul 23, 2008 12:43 pm

Moderator Ailita wrote:
Reminds me of Eilasil back on Retail.. Didn't he arrest your bro once? XD

haha yea he did ^^ because he got drunk and almost killed an undead :3
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PostSubject: Re: Cyndril's story   Cyndril's story I_icon_minitimeWed Jul 23, 2008 1:08 pm

_Oaken_ wrote:
Good story. I'm tempted to make a warlock named Easil. O_o

*cries* please don't ruin my plot ^^ it's not over yet...some things have to happen to cyndril
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PostSubject: Re: Cyndril's story   Cyndril's story I_icon_minitimeWed Jul 23, 2008 3:02 pm

Cyndirl ...who is your charter and what is there name, i havent see you on yet today
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PostSubject: Re: Cyndril's story   Cyndril's story I_icon_minitimeWed Jul 23, 2008 3:41 pm

Her character's name should be Cyndril.
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PostSubject: Re: Cyndril's story   Cyndril's story I_icon_minitimeWed Jul 23, 2008 3:47 pm

Moderator Oaken wrote:
Her character's name should be Cyndril.

really? scratch Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Cyndril's story   Cyndril's story I_icon_minitimeWed Jul 23, 2008 3:50 pm

Naring wrote:
Cyndirl ...who is your charter and what is there name, i havent see you on yet today

cyndril and i didn't had the time yet to come online >_>
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PostSubject: Re: Cyndril's story   Cyndril's story I_icon_minitimeWed Jul 23, 2008 10:16 pm

really good story, i like it.
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